Lovecraft mainly wrote of people who discovered the world was doomed to succumb
to dark, insane gods. If you have never read a Lovecraft tale, it is hard to
relate to you the power of his language. His vocabulary and tone make Poe seem
like Jane Austen.
This particular story is a treasure trove of dark
descriptions. Just about every line is pregnant with dread. I am particularly
fond of the line: “A sickened, sensitive shadow writhing in hands that are not
hands, and whirled blindly past ghastly midnights of rotting creation, corpses
of dead worlds with sores that were cities, charnel winds that brush the pallid
stars and make them flicker low.” It is poetic, evocative and deeply
disturbing both in the context of the story and, simply, in the image it
creates.
Writing horror is a tricky business because you really have
to think about what you intend your story to do. Do you want your readers
losing sleep to nightmares? Do you want to create disgust or shock? I think
Lovecraft wanted his prose to disturb his readers. He wanted to create vivid
landscapes of a nightmarish pseudo-reality and mindscapes of psychosis born of
the knowledge that nightmares are the pale reflection of the really horrible
things that exist and have been discovered. This story is effective because it
is relentless horror. It smothers the reader with so much vivid dark detail
that by the time you reach the end you are breathless and, yes, disturbed.
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